FIRST EVIL by JOHN WHITE (Book Review #1644)

In his debut dark fantasy novel, author White invites readers into the tumultuous world of disorder in the fantastical city of Arcatia. “FIRST EVIL” unfolds as a captivating narrative with a cast of characters as diverse as the challenges they face, offering a memorable epic quest laced with dashes of dark humor.

At the center of the chaos is Finch Crushluck, a disreputable individual who cleverly masquerades as a “death priest” with a supposed ability to communicate with the deceased. However, Finch’s talents are put to the test when a sorcerer named Lojean and a giant named Tolek recruit him to interrogate a slain dragon about the whereabouts of a powerful magical amulet.

The narrative weaves together multiple plotlines, introducing Lowthraxinor, a dwarf on trial for treason, who takes a drastic turn by eliminating the entire tribunal. Driven by a relentless desire to revive the declining dwarf empire of Kormodgeon, Lowthraxinor sets his sights on retrieving the coveted amulet, demonstrating an unforgiving nature towards anything that impedes his path.

The world itself is in disarray, with the enigmatic “Wasting,” a swirling morass of clouds, wreaking havoc on those who encounter it in the Null—a land housing the sought-after amulet. Celeste Varbringer, a determined airship captain, emerges as a central figure, navigating the complexities of the Null in her quest to find her kidnapped daughter, Ingrid.

While the narrative occasionally delves into more dry and earnest material, White infuses the story with comic relief through the character of Finch. Likable and endowed with a sense of humor, Finch becomes a source of empathy, even as he maneuvers through the complexities of a world in turmoil.

The novel’s strength lies in its engaging characters, from the bloodthirsty Lowthraxinor to the endearing Finch, whose interactions inject life into a story that is both violent and complex. White succeeds in crafting a fantastical realm where quirky elements, such as the Null and the Wasting, contribute to the story’s unique flavor.

Despite occasional moments of generic dialogue, the narrative remains anchored by the memorable characters and the dark humor that punctuates their journey. “FIRST EVIL” is a commendable debut that explores the boundaries of fantasy, offering readers an immersive experience that combines chaos, complexity, and a touch of levity. White’s inaugural work promises a promising future in the realm of dark fantasy storytelling.

Written by Jeyran Main

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