Pearls Of Time: Between Gods and Mortals by Whitney Rines (Book Review #75)

 

The land of Liansea is constantly corrupted and ravaged by the Immortals. They kill, commit genocide, poison the minds of mortals and conduct many more horrific crimes until Cabbah arrives.

Cabbah eliminates all of the Immortals except five. She appears to have stronger powers and possesses more love for the world and the humans living in it. Instead of killing the five left, she awards them with different punishments. For instance, she awards one with the responsibility of being the Gatekeeper to the underworld and awards another, the Godhood of being responsible for the peace, protection, and prosperity. As Cabbah reaches Lizia and Fayet (twins), she bestows the responsibility of mothering, fate, and prophecy to Lizia and leaves Fayet to guard her.

They can all become free of this forced duty until they learn to love, mend what they have corrupted and to pay their penance.

The story mostly focuses on Lizia and Fayet. The love between the brother and the sister is very sweet. Although Fayet is the one responsible for protecting Lizia from the dark forces and monsters that attack, it is Lizia, that is mostly worrying and guiding him towards doing the right thing. As Lizia continues to conduct her duties, Fayet falls in love with a mortal, Ayshir. This distraction prevents Fayet from adequately protecting Lizia and so she asks him to go to Ayshir and to be with her. Lizia tells Fayet that she will call for help if need be.

Although I found the relationship between Ayshir and Fayet to be uncomfortable at first, her being so young and him being more demanding than asking, it did grow on me. The family they create together nurses much love and joy. However, one thing is inevitable, and that is Ayshir is a human. Humans don’t live forever. Dark forces and other unfortunate things create much drama for this loving couple due to this fact and more. The ending of the book leaves you with a bang generating a lot of desire for wanting to know what happens next.

The standard of literature is excellent. It possesses a touch of poetry like writing, which adds to the language God’s speak. The plot and twists embedded were very well calculated and planned. I initially thought that the story was going to focus on the five immortals, but it moved on to Fayet and his destiny instead. The tale has an extreme amount of potential for many more adaptations. The author has done a tremendous job in describing human nature’s emotions and the complications of being with a God. When time is meaningless to one and precious to the other, how can a relationship survive?

I believe that this book would be suitable for anyone and not just for Science Fiction or Fantasy readers.

I look forward to reading more from this Author.

Written by Jeyran Main
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To Trust a Wolf – by Danielle Hardgrave (Book Review #74)

 

Helen is an archivist working in a museum and she is in charge of an annual event where she collects money from donors to keep the museum running. Her job is very important to her.  A historical discovery regarding a Viking hoard attracts a lot of people, and that causes an increase in her responsibilities. Unknown to her, there is something hidden in the artifacts which put her life, museum, and everyone else in danger.

Here comes Rune Helsen, a dashing man to her rescue with a secret of his own. His agenda is not pure or clear until the end. However, he does seem to grab the heart of our heroine, and as she falls for him, Rune manages to reveal this secret to Helen while explaining the reason why many are interested in the Viking hoard.

 

She tags along with him on this discovery, and they are now on a mission, which will continue as Book 2.

I was astonished to see how a short story could contain this much novel content. I was very impressed by how this Author did not waste any time in including backstory and managed to build enough character to continue with her next book.

The paragraphs, literary standard and dialogues were very well put together and easy to understand. There was no fluffing of pages, and I was pleased with the mannerism of the entire plot including the twist in the story.

The tale does contain sexual content and supernatural creatures such as Vikings, Vampires, and Werewolves. This paranormal romance did also remind me of the Twilight Saga.

I recommend this book to anyone that is interested in a short story filled with paranormal creatures.

Written by Jeyran Main

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Pearl, MD: The Way West by Marie Bartlett (Book Review #73)

The way of the West begins right where we were left off. Pearl is a physician in the nineteenth-century society. This was when women were not welcome to have a profession. African Americans are also treated poorly. Healing them as a patient is unacceptable and hiring them as an assistant is profound upon and bad for business. People that find her ways different burn her medical center to the ground, and she has no choice but to stay at a hotel until she finds out what she is to do now. In this second book, the Author provides a short backstory just to remind the reader of what’s happened so far in book one, and then she moves on to the story, full speed.

Even though Pearl consistently receives bad news, she is stronger than ever. As she is trying to figure out her own life, Pearl is informed that her best friend is dying and she may be losing the baby too. Pearl has to leave Asheville and travel to the West to save her friend Victoria.

There is a slight problem, though, Pearl is now romantically inclined with Herschel, and although there are no wedding bells ringing, her departure may affect and terminate this newfound love between them.

She has to make a decision and fast. She decides to ask Loomey her assistant to travel with her, and she agrees to accompany her for at least half of the way. Pearl makes a stop to see her parents and does some questioning towards finding the person who set her medical office on fire. Loomey has to return home as her husband is injured in a fight and his life is in danger. Pearl continues the journey alone to the west.

When she arrives, things do not look good. Not only is her friend in bad shape but also she discovers new things that disgust her. This is where the story really grabs your attention. She is confronted, conned, tricked and worst of all she has to save her friend from herself as well as her surroundings. Caine, Pearl’s previous love interest is also there to make things even more uncomfortable and Walter, Victoria’s husband, is acting very weird.

I was stuck to this book like glue and could not put it down. The literary standard of writing and the references to so many sensitive subjects will blow your mind. Human trafficking, sex trades, racial encounters, and women’s rights are just a few mentioned which the Author touches on.

Pearl is so gracious and kind that you find it very hard not to fall in love with. She has such a beautiful spirit to an extent where she does not care what others think regardless of how much it affects her social status. She even refuses to send Loomey to a different car just because she is of different skin color. Pearl joins Loomey in her ride to prove a point to the others.

This book is really a gem and from the beginning to the end, will it continue to surprise you.

I highly recommend this book to anyone that is looking to read something out of this world.

Written by Jeyran Main

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Cancer – A Dreaded Affliction by James D. Okun, MD

 

The term “cancer” evokes thoughts of fear and death. The “Big C” is one of the most dreaded diagnoses in all of the medicine. Even celebrities like Angelina Jolie have taken drastic steps to avoid the possibility of developing breast cancer if they are at high risk, by choosing to electively and preventively have a double mastectomy.

Just today the comedian and actor Ben Stiller came out with the fact that he had been diagnosed with prostate cancer in 2014. It turned out that the PSA screening blood test for prostate cancer had alerted his physician and the cancer was caught early before it could spread. He said he felt lucky to be alive and then wanted to learn more about the disease. Now it has been two years since his diagnosis, and he is “cancer free.”So what is the definition of cancer and how long has it existed?

The term cancer is derived from the Greek word for crab “karkinos,” and there is evidence of descriptions of cancer even 2500 years ago.  Apparently Hippocrates known as the “Father of Modern Medicine” in the year 400 BC (2417 years ago) thought either that cancerous tumors were often hard like the shell of a crab, or that he observed that cancer often spread the same way a creeping, crawling crab moved, and so he named the disease cancer “karkinos”.

Eventually, the term “karkinos” was translated into Latin in 47 AD by the Greek philosopher Celsus  to the term we recognize today as “cancer.”

All of the organs of the body are made up of unique cells. In cancer, there is basically wild cell growth in a specific organ of the body that is out of control. Cancer cells respect no boundaries that normally exist between cells and pile on top of each other eventually forming a tumor mass.

 

The cells can also have bizarre sizes and shapes. These areas of cancer can either remain in the organ where it originated or spread through the bloodstream and lymphatic systems to another area of the body which is called “metastasis.” It is thought that mutations in genes can either increase the rate at which cells divide or inhibit the normal control mechanisms that regulate the growth cycle of the cell.

According to the American Cancer Society (Cancer Facts and Figures 2016), the most common type of cancer in the United States is breast cancer followed by lung cancer and prostate cancer.

Treatments for cancer include chemotherapy which destroys cancer cells but often has severe side effects such as nausea, hair loss, and suppression of the immune system.

New cancer treatments include “targeted” drug therapy which acts on specific target molecules associated with the cancer cell to block abnormal cellular growth.

 Written by – James D. Okun


James D. Okun, MD is a Phi Beta Kappa graduate of Duke University and the Albert Einstein College of Medicine in New York. He is the author of Erasing Scars: Herpes and Healing and of The History of New Innovations in Modern Medicine.  

Stars Above by Marissa Meyer (Book Review #8)

 

Summary

“The enchantment continues…

The universe of the Lunar Chronicles holds stories—and secrets—that are wondrous, vicious, and romantic. How did Cinder first arrive in New Beijing? How did the brooding soldier Wolf transform from young man to killer? When did Princess Winter and the palace guard Jacin realize their destinies?” – by Marissa Meyer

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Review

As essentials, it is safe to say that Marissa Meyers has made a good attempt to cover anything left from the Lunar Chronicles. The purpose of this book and the description provided matches its content. Each story is unique to its previous published chapter.

The Literary and standards of which the book is written are very well similar to Ms. Meyer’s previous published works. I believe that the author’s purpose was to cover and to add to her previously published work, by offering Stars Above as a sweet addition to her tales.

Since the book is divided into sections, it is only fair to review it individually. However, before I even begin, I would like to say that compared to other Authors and their book series; where the Author decides to add a book, in the end, to cover loose ends, Marissa Meyer did not waste time providing just a filler to her fans. She respected the need for explaining a few things that were questionable and gave us a good wrap up on all things that were unsaid.

 

The Keeper demonstrates a comprehensive and detailed story of why Scarlet has been behaving the way she has. Her mannerism and personality is no longer a secret, and I began to like her more, due to this now known vital information. This passage also explains a lot about Michelle Benoit. She has a love story that surprised me and was delightfully plotted by Marissa Meyer. You also comprehend and understand why Scarlet loves her grandma so much.

Glitches, touches base on the relationship Cinder has with Peony and her few early days with the new family. It does not hold much content worth getting excited or to discover and unfortunately lacks any substantial plot or substance.

The Queen’s Army is a delightful addition to the Lunar Chronicles. We hardly know much about Wolf throughout his journey. How he started and who his parents were was very interestingly plotted. All the fight scenes were well written with structure, and the whole theme of this story was satisfactory to complete its tale.

Carswell’s guide to being lucky starts with his family. You do feel sorry for Carswell and understand why he is such a bad boy. Girls are very attracted to him for obvious reasons and without too much detail, we just get to read a little more about how he struggles to make ends meet. Many pages were dedicated to this passage but unfortunately lacked any significant content.

After Sunshine Passes By is a beautiful and great story of Cress, her father and how she was chosen and taken away from her family. You get to read about her favourite poem and where it originates. It really gives you a sweet impression on Cress. The theme and story were appealing and worth reading.

The Princess and the guard also receive a substantial portion of Stars Above. Her relationship with Jacin is not the original story, but the relationship between Winter and her parents brings us to the conclusion of why she receives the scar she does. I believe that this was done in a logical explanation as it leads us to an understanding that Winter is not some crazy weak girl that does not know much about her surroundings. She is very smart and powerful. I wished that this personality was portrayed more in Marissa Meyer’s Winter book. However, I am happy that at least she covers this section up nicely.

The Little Android receives another dominant part of Stars Above and unfortunately, did not appeal as much to me. The impression you get is more confused at times, and then you do ask yourself what the point of the whole section is. I personally did not understand much of its content or comprehend the theme of what the Author was trying to achieve.

 

Something Old, Something New is probably the best part of Stars Above. I absolutely loved it and found it incredibly exciting and was smiling the whole time while I was reading it. The reason behind this is that you get to see everyone together for the last time. The time is after the war now, and everyone is happily situated together. Marissa Meyer attempts to show us a detailed explanation on what has happened after the war is won. A beautifully written wedding between two people that have had a hard past takes place to finalize our Lunar Chronicle Series.

A pleasant ending to a very sweet tale.

Jeyran Main

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Weight Loss for Vegans by Kayla Keyes (Book Review #26)

Lose weight and learn how to self-love in ten days using Kayla’s structured diet plan.

Kayla Keyes begins to tell us the reasons why we even start to consider making changes in our life. She believes that there are events that trigger our feelings, for example, separation, moving away from home or a new job. Her intentions are not for us to just lose some weight but to also “lose the baggage” she claims, “we are carrying around (externally & internally).”

 

The whole book is for vegans; that is a no-brainer considering the name of the book clearly states that however if you are not a vegan, you can still benefit from this book and still lose some weight. You just won’t be consuming any meat.

The program provides a shopping list, some aspirational quotes to motivate you and to help you succeed. Kayla provides recipes and instructions with every meal. This book is more like a detox plan. You can also continue with the diet plan after ten days if you wish.

The problem I had with the book was that there are no references to how many people have tried this or how successful her regime plan is. There are also no personal information or any story to suggest if she has struggled with weight loss (a reason to write such a book). There is also nothing stating how she even came up with such a diet plan in the book.

 

What I did like about the book was that she asks you to reward yourself with things that you like such as a spa treatment or a nail appointment, a haircut rather than indulging in fast food. I also liked the fact that she encourages exercise with the program and consistently makes sure that you know losing weight comes with you being happy with yourself. It does not matter what size or shape you wish to be. As long as you are comfortable in your own skin, then it is good enough for everyone else. There are four steps provided by the Author to assist you with improvement on your current level of self-love. I believe that is useful for anyone in any condition even if they don’t want to lose weight.

I recommend this book to anyone that wishes to lose weight and also learn a little about self-love.

Written by Jeyran Main

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Acute Renal Failure -12 Year Anniversary off Dialysis – Never give up! by James Okun

November 30, 2016, celebrated the thirteenth year since I suddenly went into acute renal failure from an unknown cause and almost died. Even as a physician, I was completely shocked to learn that from one day to the next my kidneys had shut down and I was in kidney, heart and respiratory failures (See my book The History of New Innovations in Modern Medicine Chapter 1).

It turns out that I was in pretty good company as many others develop renal failure each year (More than 661,000 Americans have kidney failure with 468,000 on dialysis http://www.kidney.org) including some very famous people who eventually died from it.

Some well know victims of Kidney failure include: Greta Garbo, Jean Harlow, Chiang Kai-shek, Julia Child, Alfred Hitchcock, Marlene Dietrich, Howard Hughes and General Douglas MacArthur (www.ranker.com).

Normally, your kidneys filter out toxins from the blood, reabsorb important nutrients and preserve water balance. When they fail, toxins build up in the blood, edema develops and if not treated the patient can die.

Some causative factors of acute renal failure include the effects of certain toxins and poisons, heavy metals and medications, acute blood loss and dehydration, sepsis or mechanical blockage (such as from an enlarged prostate See Chap 3 The History of…). Kidney failure can also result from the long-term effects of conditions such as diabetes, high blood pressure and auto immune diseases such as lupus.

If you know anyone undergoing dialysis, please support them to the utmost. It is absolutely lifesaving, and without it, the patient will die, but it is also very difficult to tolerate.

When I was on dialysis for six weeks in 2003/2004, I would get severe muscle spasms during the three to four hours undergoing treatment. One time I had an episode of acute diarrhea and lay on the bed mortified in the Charity Hospital dialysis unit (since closed after Katrina) as a nurse’s aide had to clean up the mess. I was pretty hopeless.

After outpatient treatments, I would come home so weak I had to crawl to the front door. I remember one day lying in bed and weeping because I truly believed I would never be free again to travel or exercise or do anything without being tethered to a dialysis machine. I prayed to God to help me and to send me a miracle.

The miracle came after the dialysis shunt clotted in my neck and it was taken out. I was prepped for a permanent shunt in my arm. When the preop labs came back, they were normal. No one could believe it. My prayers had been answered. Gratitude, faith, and belief had overcome cynicism, anger, and doubt. So, as bad as things may seem, be proportionate and never give up!


James D. Okun, MD is a Phi Beta Kappa graduate of Duke University and of the Albert Einstein College of Medicine in New York. He is the co-author of The History of New Innovations in Modern Medicine and of Erasing Scars: Herpes and Healing.


The Selection Series by Kiera Cass – Eadlyn’s Tale (Book Review #7)

 

“Eadlyn Helena Margarete Schreave de Koskinen is the main protagonist in the novels The Heir and The Crown and the prize of her own Selection. She is the daughter of King Maxon Schreave and Queen America Schreave, making her princess of Illéa. In The Crown, she becomes the first Queen of Illéa. She has a twin brother, named Ahren, who is seven minutes younger than her, and two other younger brothers, Kaden and Osten.”- by Kiera Cass

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Review

The Selection series is a 5-novel book about two girls named America & Eadlyn written by Kiera Cass.

I managed to read all five of the books in July and found them very easy to understand and to follow.

“The Heir” and “The Crown” were written in 2015 and 2016. Without giving too much away for people that have not yet read the book, I would like to give a small description of the whole thing before I comment on my feelings about it.

Eadlyn is America’s daughter and next in line to take the crown. The caste system and the political situation of the country have changed. Eadlyn has been trained and taught everything she needs to know from birth and has a whole new set of problems and dramas to comprehend.

 

Eadlyn was fortunate with having considerate parents and the fact that her father trained her so well for the time that she was to become queen made the whole story very appealing. Although a few times you could see her rage, stubbornness or snappiness, you knew where they came from, and she managed to stay calm, firm and very independent throughout the whole tale.

The story contained the same witty skill of which, is Kiera’s writing and kept its beautiful visual scenes of cute dresses. It was nice to see how a country is ruled, and there was much more depth into the political side of things where we hardly saw any of that when Maxon was the prince.

One of the main negative parts of the story, in my opinion, was that majority of the book was continuously commenting on how she hated being trained, hated the workload, disliked becoming queen and hated having to choose a husband from the selection. Overnight, suddenly she becomes so eager to have the crown that she asks to become queen before her parents are even dead or want to give it all up! This change of heart is not only sudden, but the odd part was that she thought that she was able to do it all by herself too. Only afterward did she start assembling different people for different positions and all the training clicked into place. Otherwise, from the beginning and right up until the story ends, Eadlyn did not want any of it.

 

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Another concern was that the men chosen for the selection seemed to be doing nothing but hanging around until she would spend time with them. They were so bored that they would come up with ideas to even entertain themselves or play games outside. When Maxon was going through the selection, all the girls were going through daily training and etiquette lessons. They were taught about the country, the demands and were studying, training for the day that they may become queen. I did not understand why anything of this sort was happening for Eadlyn’s selection. The intensity of things was much harsher and more disciplined around Maxon’s time.

Eadlyn remained clueless about love and what it meant to be in love right until the last couple of chapters. When she eventually found what it meant, it was so sudden, cheap and not much content revolved around it. It almost looked as if it was more infatuation rather than true love. The term “soul mate” was used in so many ways yet she only had two meetings with the one she liked discussing very simple things such as “what does your father do?” I believe if Kiera had brought up this love sooner in the book and gradually increased it, then it would have been a much more in depth, believable love. Subsequently, Eadlyn’s reasoning for breaking all the selection rules would then not look so much out of her character. She was always on regulation and guidelines, which was nice.

I still enjoyed reading the two books and was happy with the flow of everything. It was nice to see and learn more about the king and queen, Miss Marlee and of course Aspen. Kiera did an excellent job in connecting everyone together and finishing it all with a happy ending. I just wished that the ending did not look so rushed.

Written by Jeyran Main

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The Clerk by Matt Cowper (Book Review #62)

 

The Clerk is a story about Thomas. It begins with his birthday and as he turns 40 things in his life could not be more pleasant. Thomas works in a grocery store and lives on the North Carolina Coast. He consumes good food and has almost no friends. Nothing really rattles his boat. Thomas has a friend with benefits, and she satisfies his other needs. He feels that there is nothing wrong with the way he lives. Thomas is content as can be with his life.

Thomas’ father, on the other hand, is not so pleased with him. Frank Copeland, does not approve of Thomas’s life. Thomas has no career, no steady girl, and very few friends. Frank believes that Thomas’ fate may end up like his grandfather’s with suicide. Thomas’ family is dysfunctional, and his sister is on the verge of a divorce. Everyone around him constantly brings their troubles to him, and he just ignores them away with one line comments or by just walking away. He can’t fix their problems so why bother helping?

 

While the story may seem very plain and ordinary to the eyes of some, it has a few captivating messages within. If you look closer and deeper, you actually can identify a family that is suffering from depression, self-doubt, bonding and mental issues. A history of suicide that runs from father to son and commitment issues that Thomas personally suffers are all alarming segments of this fictional story.

Thomas views women by not just looking at their face or eyes. When he looks, it is mostly sexual. The way he describes the women he meets all begin with their hair colour, the way her lips tease and then the figure and explicitly carries on until you really feel that you have read enough. He has a problem with staying or wanting to commit to any woman. The women around him also do not seem to dig deeper into his issues to figure out what he really is lacking. His simple life is not acceptable to his family and to the people he knows.

 

There is no exciting plot or a twisted scene where you need to look out for. It is a straightforward book with no grammatical or structural issues, which I was impressed with. The pace of the story meshes very well with the theme of the book, and the literary standard was impressive.

I would really like a sequel to this book. I want to see how this back-story works out for Thomas.

I recommend this book to Fiction readers and look forward to reading more from this Author.

Written by Jeyran Main

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