Anna: New Los Angeles by Jason Keating (Book Review #277)

Anna is a sci-fi mystery novel. The story is based in the future. It is 2039, and things have changed. Survival is key, and the world has been attacked by a virus eliminating most of its population. Whoever’s left, consider themselves to be the lucky ones. There are eight cities to live in, and only one of them is occupied by the humans. The humans are coexisting with human synthetics called, Anna. Kyle is one of the survivors who happens to witness his parents die from the virus. He is taken to remain safe alongside the survivors by machines called the Axton. His journey through this world is what transpires in this book to be an epic challenge and adventure.

I initially found the odd numbers between the paragraphs and the sudden chapter changes without any division between the segments to be annoying. It kept distracting me from the smooth flow of the work, however, the more I read, the more I was intrigued, and my eyes began to zoom out the issues I was having with formatting.

The literature was easy to understand, and the book is a futuristic take on something like the movie, I am Legend. I particularly liked the emotional conflict Kyle had with losing his loved one and how that played along with the plot until the end. I believe the author has definitely done his research and created an exciting world, worthy of exploring. I found much room for improvement and sequels to play along this book. The foundation of the world setting and the descriptive backstory was very helpful to understand the past in order to play along with the current situation of the survivors.

I recommend this book to people who enjoy futuristic tales and like sci-fi novels.

Written by Jeyran Main

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How we write – by Dan Abrahams

How we write – by Dan Abrahams

 

Before you start imagining this is a guide on how the collective ‘we’ write, in all areas, including character creation, story outline and development and then actually sitting down to put words on a page, it is not.

I am not part of any collective ‘We’ – I am a writer, of a fashion. I do not write in any formulaic way, have never been to creative writing classes, and do not have some overarching idea of instilling a workman like attitude to it. I do however, go through varied ways of writing and find this the best way.

We have all heard of writers who recommend sitting at a desk between 8am and 11am before drinking lemon tea for five hours – or those who swear writing every day all day is the only way to find your true style etcetera, etcetera and so on.

One ‘daily writing routine’ that did strike me as worth reading was that of Hunter Stockton Thompson featured in E. Jean Carroll’s 1994 book: HUNTER: The Strange and Savage life of…

This list of lunacy may not be for many, especially as it contains a lengthy waking period of ‘Chivas Regal with morning papers, Dunhill cigarette’ – followed by cocaine, another ‘Chivas, Dunhill, first cup of coffee, Dunhill, cocaine, orange juice, Dunhill, cocaine, cocaine, cocaine’ and so on, before sitting down to write several hours later.

Some of it would definitely get the creative juices going, if you have the constitution of a horse, but drink and writing do not work for me. This admission may have faced scorn from Hemingway for example who, paraphrasing badly, said; ‘writers who cannot drink and write, are not drinking enough’.

So, there is the rub, I have no idea what does work for me, except that aforementioned pearls of wisdom such as: ‘write everyday stuff’, are something I consider to be nonsense and of course drink.

It has always struck me that art in any form is a natural thing, it is a living creative force that takes time to form, gestate and then if the writer/artist sits down and writes, birth and live.

Sat here now in a muted morning sun in ‘Sunny Worthing’ and no that’s not a piss take title the town I live in has been given, similar to that of vandalised ‘Help Shark’ Amity Island billboard as featured in Jaws, someone actually believes it’s true with regards to Worthing.

Sorry I went off on one, or did I? Did I unconsciously follow a creative path or line, in the same way that stories, ideas, characters should take writers? The type of path that sitting at a desk every day, stifles? If it doesn’t take you somewhere dreamlike and unimagined, what will it do to any poor reader unfortunate enough to view your work?

Maybe the title of this essay is wrong, it’s not How We Write, more How I Write, or come around to doing so.

I have noticed and touched on this topic in the foreword of my last release: Books, Bits & Bobs, where I briefly discussed how ideas all come – similar to children – in their own inimitable way. Some in the shape of organised form, some written in one sitting without any idea where you are starting from or ending up. Whatever way, they are all different and not born of discipline.

For example, in the children’s title I currently have with my proof reading hero Jason – this was started as a roughly laid out plan, you know a beginning, middle and end, I then filled this out with a series of adventures and created the characters, but here is where things were different and followed my comments earlier about ‘a creative path’, because I recorded the book from there, using a Dictaphone. Waking at all hours, creating different voices for the characters, acting out the book as if it was a play, I had no real idea where I was going only basic guides, which I had memorised. Once recorded I then transcribed and Bob’s your Uncle – actually he was my dad – the book was done. I have never written or created in this manner since – it was as if this ‘child’ needed to be born this way – so it could have its own individuality.

I suppose the point I am making is how I write is how you write, it is not a process – we just make sure we do write, but not ‘every day at 8am’ followed by lemon tea. Well, that’s what I think anyway.

Written by  Dan Abrahams


Daniel Abrahams has released two eBook titles on Amazon: The Wooden Heart and Books, Bits & Bobs

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TJ’s Ride by J.R. Hamilton (Book Review #280)

TJ’s Ride is book one of ‘The TJ Series.’ This action adventure novel is about Petty Officer Thomas Hamlin (TJ). He works for the Navy and is brought back to Corpus Christi after being away for almost two years, in Vietnam. TJ is then blackmailed by Captain Joseph. He sends TJ to fight against some drug traffickers forcing TJ to go undercover as a bouncer, just to get down with the drug rings and to expose them. Read More

So you want to be an author, huh? by an Indian

So you want to be an author, huh? by an Indian

So you want to be an author, huh? Join the queue. Millions of dreamers want to be one, and they are very talented writers with a repertoire of some fancy and obscure words that are seldom used. Their grammar is perfect, and their statement construction is flawless. So it should be a no-brainer for them to write great books that everyone wants to read. Right? Wrong.

Many elements make up a good book. The most important aspect (at least in my opinion) is that the story should come from the heart. When I started to write my book in January of 2010, it took me less than a week to pour my initial thoughts down. However, to expand on the idea, to read over and over again for typos, to tighten the storyline, etc. – took me about fifteen months. Was it worth it? Absolutely. It was a journey down memory lane that I thoroughly enjoyed. If you decide to write a book, don’t hurry. I know…I know…you must be thinking, “it’s easy for you to say.” But believe me, it’s worth it. I too was very impatient in the beginning as I was very eager to have my “masterpiece” out.

My thinking was straightforward. To make people read my book and let them decide if it was worth their time. Unlike seeing a movie (where one spends only 2-3 hours of their time), reading a book is at least a week of their time. So it better be worth it.

Written by An Indian


About the author: The author was born and raised in Mumbai, India. He came to the US in 1989 to New York. He currently resides in Los Angeles with his wife and two children.


Website: www.indiawasone.com

Facebook: www.facebook.com/indiawasone

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Amazon US: https://www.amazon.com/India-Was-One-Indian-ebook/dp/B004S3OWO0/

Flipkart India: https://www.flipkart.com/india-was-one/p/itmejdh6gt4zzzgk

 


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Escape from Ancient Egypt – (The Neiko Adventure Saga Book 2) by A. K. Taylor (Book Review #30)

 

This review is written for Online Book Club.

“I rate this book 2 out of 4 stars.”

Neiko is an Indian Admiral and a strong warrior girl of Hawote, the hidden land that coexisted with the United States, Canada, and Mexico. There are seven tribes in this story. Neiko is loved by many and has the support and loyalty of her own tribe, and her allies are willing to die for her. The Crackedskulls, Prince Bloodhawk, Raven, and Francesco are all enemies of the Hawote. Many wars have been fought between them for the right to rule the land.

 

Francesco has visions of becoming the Pharoah of Hawote. His plan entails changing the timeline by eliminating Neiko from the present and poisoning the Bloodhawks and the Ravens. He obtains a crystal stone that gives him the ability to go anywhere he desires or to send someone else to the past, present, or the future. Francesco finds an opportunity to confront Neiko and sends her to Egypt, about three thousand years in the past, during the reign of Ramesses the Great.

What intrigues me is that once Neiko finds herself in this ordeal, she does not panic at all. In fact, she continues along on her merry way and tries to find her friends who have been missing for the past eleven years. She and her friends have to find a way to return to the year 2001 and set things straight for the last time. On their journey, they are captured, enslaved, forced to fight, to marry, and many more wondrous things.

I like the plot of the story and all the action that went with it. The pace was good enough to carry the reader into wanting to know more. It is an excellent choice for kids to read and to enjoy. The way the warrior men supported and protected Neiko after being abandoned for eleven years was admirable. Their bond was unyielding, and Neiko was never treated differently for being a woman. They saw her as a warrior and loved her for who she was.

This book was very hard for me to review as I really do not like to address the hard work of an author in such a way. However, since I have promised myself to be sincere and truthful, I would like to also mention the parts that I did not enjoy.

There is an overwhelming load of characters and names in this book. So many, that I was beginning to wonder how many more are going to be introduced? Having not read book one also did not help. There was a severe lack of backstory and that is a great weakness for this book.

I can’t remember the last time I saw picture illustrations in a novel. A note to authors, if you plan to do such a thing, then make the images big enough to see. In this book they were small, and I could barely understand what it was supposed to display.

This story, in my opinion, is a good young adult book but not a good historical fiction book. There are tiny ancient facts, references, and back-story and in fact, what did exist was quite comical. If you are buying this for a kid, then it is okay, but anyone that has some knowledge on Ancient Egypt will find this book lacking many basic details.

In summary, I would recommend this book for children and young adults only. It has just enough excitement and action to keep the young mind wondering and wanting to know more.

Written by Jeyran Main

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Introducing the Messiah by King David (Book Review #448)

Introducing the Messiah by King David

 

Introducing the Messiah is a religious book containing an interview which happened as an email exchange between King David and a skeptic.

 

The questions in the book were either personal or religiously inclined which happened to show a balance of both.

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Tracer by Cher Smith (Book Review #282)

Tracer is a psychological thriller written about Z Ellis. The Eradication of Violent Crimes has come up with the concept of software that erases the memories of people who have committed horrendous crimes such as mass murders. By replacing the memory and creating a whole new identity, they hope that the individual would lead a normal life without committing any more crimes. Z Ellis is one of these people.

When Gage McAlister, the inventor of such a program meets with Z and begins to doubt whether he did the right thing by taking away Z’s memory and making him believe he is someone else.

The journey Z takes in order to identify what is real and what is fake, is extraordinary. The story is written with explicit intention to create confusion and induce twists to the plot, in order to innovate different scenarios in the reader’s mind, just to read along to find out what happens next.

The literature standard was strong, and the work appeared very well put together. The pace of the story was steady and provided enough world setting to assist the reader in drawing an imaginary picture in their head. The character development, even with the conflicting personalities, was very intriguing. It made a superb recipe for an ideal psychological thriller.

I highly recommend this book if you are looking for a story to provoke your mind.

This review was kindly requested by Dead Key Publishing

Written by Jeyran Main

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Literature by Guillermo Stitch (Book Review #449)

Literature by Guillermo Stitch

 

Literature is a sci-fi novella. Billy Stinger is a terrorist that is always strapped for time and has some explaining to do with his life choices. The odds are definitely against him in this thrilling fictional story.

 

The story is just one day and begins with him showing up later for work, he has not dressed appropriately, and his girlfriend is not happy with him. Billy’s character is interesting in the matter of being so particular. He isn’t necessarily the hero nor is he the anti-hero. The mixture made a difference to this short story.

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Kid Friendly Books – (Day 10)

There are hundreds of books written for children, however, how do you know which one is the right one?

In my opinion, if a book has a positive learning message for your child then it is definitely worth finding. At the end of the day, your child takes inspiration, education, and notes from everything they read. Therefore, it’s vital that they exposed to the correct form of information.

A Color of His Own by (Leo Lionni)

This book emphasizes good friends and accepting oneself. It is visually beautiful and carries a very colorful illustration that grabs the child’s interest. The powerful message embedded in this book is what makes this book one of the best ones to have.

 

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